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anger crushed down in sin by ~just-once-more:iconjust-once-more:



anger
im crushed
drown in sin
look down to see what ive done again

cut my arm
watch the blood
blade so sweet
red drops to my feet

fall down
cry outloud
hit the ground
pound, pound, pound

run out the door
yell at god to give me more
blood in my viens
to spills to the floor

i want more
blood in the carpet
i want to see it before i fall again
i drowned in my sin

the fall so short
but yet longer then my life
to take it tonight
wouldnt make anything right

poeple get sad
people grow old
people die everyday
my wrist and blade want to play

i cant say no
i dont have the strength today
i wish i did
i drown in my own sin

i cry everyday
when im in the hall
and people...
oh god...people

they rip you apart
and they think is ok
but you only take it at the start
then it goes to far and you fall apart

let my sweet blade touch my skin
the cold steel will bring me back again
i will be ok as long as i dont think
about anything other then my sweet sweet blade
©2008-2009 ~just-once-more
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:no: awww thats so sad.... :hug: i promise whatever is goign on in your life thats bad right now im always here to talk to buddy :nod: very dark and poetic ...although now i worry about you :(

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The Sharpest Lives are the Deadliest to Lead :evillaugh: ---My Chemical Romance "the sharpest lives" :explosion:
Well, written. I can really feel the emotion in this. Nicely written.

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its all about you,
so every morning when you wake,
before the first step that you take,
just think:
"its all what you make it, and you'll make it through ." --
thank you

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**~no one dies a virgin, because life screws us all~**
~(~if i pull the trigger...the voices will stop~)~

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Hidden by Owner
alot of people say the same thing and i just dont think that any person could really care that much as to worry about somebody that they dont no

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**~no one dies a virgin, because life screws us all~**
~(~if i pull the trigger...the voices will stop~)~

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You welcome ^__^

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its all about you,
so every morning when you wake,
before the first step that you take,
just think:
"its all what you make it, and you'll make it through ." --
Hidden by Owner
well i care :hug: even if you dont believe me :no: :(

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The Sharpest Lives are the Deadliest to Lead :evillaugh: ---My Chemical Romance "the sharpest lives" :explosion:
Hidden by Owner
well if you do then thnks

--
**~no one dies a virgin, because life screws us all~**
~(~if i pull the trigger...the voices will stop~)~

(_______________________,
)==,,,,,,,,,,,,,______________/
|====----------------------------”
|………_)
|……..|
|____|

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